Friday, November 18, 2011
ODIOUS
I remember the time when I was little and I didn't have to take a shower everyday. One summer when I was about six my friend and I went to a sleep away camp for a week. At the camp a kid dared my friend to go a whole week without showering. When he got home his mom was furious at him. She would not let him go inside until he took a bath in the backyard, because he was so odious and disgusting.
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Grammatical challenges for the last sentence of this post: 1) what word do you mean in place of the second occasion of "he"? 2) you need a comma after the introductory dependent clause.
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