When people are little they are generally afraid of the dark. When you grow older people develop fears that are fairly strange or common. The amount of
phobias are endless from acrophobia, the fear of heights, to metro
phobia, which is the fear of hatred of poetry.
Good job Hartman! Way to get some buckets!!! Maybe put a comma between "dark" and "everyone" though!
ReplyDeleteYour first sentence is a run-on.
ReplyDeleteIf everyone is afraid of the dark as a a little person, what is more common than that?
Also, remember to put the key word in bold font.