Bill Gates is one of the most famous philanthropists in the world because he gives up so much of his money. He actually gives millions or billions of dollars to charity each year.
The phrase "largest philanthropists" is ambiguous. In other words, although you intended meaning seems evident, you need to find a clearer way to express it. IN what sense is he a large philanthropist?
Also, your second sentence has a subject-verb agreement problem.
The phrase "largest philanthropists" is ambiguous. In other words, although you intended meaning seems evident, you need to find a clearer way to express it. IN what sense is he a large philanthropist?
ReplyDeleteAlso, your second sentence has a subject-verb agreement problem.